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Hold me close 'cause I can't see
What these people've done to me
The sister who I'll never be 
And Satan in my company

Loving, laughing, lying loud
Come on, daughter, do me proud
Standing in this lonely crowd
I'll love you, always, he has vowed

What I've done
What you've seen
What I meant 
What you mean

Hold me close 'cause I can't see
What these people've done to me
Pffft I don't upload poetry here.

cuz it's bad! : D

Teeheeee

Kbai
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:iconintheaeroplane:
more of this, please.
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Doodle-Dreams Jan 27, 2011  Student General Artist
murrhurrhurr i dunnooooooo....

maaybe
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Felka-wolf Jan 26, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
zomg this is awesome! :D
i love the rhymescheme.
im currently raping it.
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:icondoodle-dreams:
Doodle-Dreams Jan 26, 2011  Student General Artist
haa thank you x3

yess!

RAP IT MANNN, RAAAP IIIT



'fore yall tap it :iconteeheegirlplz:
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Felka-wolf Jan 26, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
:iconhurrhurrplz:
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Doodle-Dreams Jan 27, 2011  Student General Artist
:iconhurrplz:
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DigSetSpike4 Jan 25, 2011   Photographer
I don't know why you think that, cuz this is really good.
I'm not just saying that, it really is.
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Doodle-Dreams Jan 26, 2011  Student General Artist
pffft i dunno, I just don't upload any poetry here.

SOSELFCONCIOUS

anndd suureee maan, suree
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DigSetSpike4 Jan 27, 2011   Photographer
reeeaally!
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